Feedback Of Pitch

The feedback consisted of:

Good Points:
-We were told we have a good plot, that it was a good idea with the birdseye view shot of the crowded scene.
-Use of variety angles.
-Good idea with cross cutting the two scenes of torture and crowds.
-Interesting idea of the enigma, hiding the main characters face leads to the audience questioning whether he is good or bad.

Bad points:
-Be careful with lowkey lighting.
-Possible problem of filming in harrow, have to seek permission.
-Rethink title.